User:MaxenGL/Internet activism/Adambocian Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MaxenGL


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Internet activism


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Internet activism

Evaluate the drafted changes
Same as the last one I am just peer reviewing the original article because like myself other students don't have anything up yet to peer review. I like the beginning of the article because it goes in and explains and gives examples of internet activism. The topic is definitely up to date and there doesn't look to be any content missing. The only thing that I would critique about the original article is that all of the "isms" they use about internet activism. They are not all necessary and get a little off topic I think. All of the sources in the Bibliography look up to date. They seem like good sources of information and relevant to the topic of internet activism.