User:Maxlydon/Milwaukie, Oregon/Trinityherndon Peer Review

Peer review

 * I will be reviewing the work of Maxlydon
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Maxlydon/sandbox

Overall, I think the changes you suggested adding are good content. This information is relevant to the content, and the references that you cite are also very current and relevant. I don't think that any of the information you added doesn't belong or is missing key parts. Your information is also displayed very neutrally and not with bias. Good job at citing your references and finding reliable ones to back up the claims made. I think that what you added is a good start, but my main suggestion would be to add more information if applicable. Since the article is already pretty large, it would be nice to see more substance from your input to make a greater mark or change to this article. Maybe adding an image of the former Amtrak that used to pass through Milwaukie could be cool.

Some small things I noticed were about language and where you suggested placing your addition. The language that was confusing to me personally was when you wrote "From 2015-2016 Milwaukie saw a bomb in real estate.". I'm assuming that bomb was maybe a typo for boom, but just thought I'd point it out. I also was curious as to how this information fits into "History", the section that you suggested adding it to. Maybe I'm just confused or missing the point, but I'm not sure if this information flows with the other content found in the history section. I think that this information, along with the rest of the paragraph of context you wrote, would fit better into the "Economy" section of this article, or possibly even in an entirely new section about housing or more current town statistics. You could even find information to reference about past real-estate sales to help show this "boom" even more. Overall, I think your updates to this article add value and insight to the article about Milwaukie, and I think you're on the right track. Trinityherndon (talk) 05:49, 7 November 2019 (UTC)