User:Maxss20/Paul and Peter Lakes/Katiebusch7 Peer Review

Hi Max,

I have read your first draft for your wiki contributions for Paul and Peter Lake. Your current word count is 545 and you have 5 refs (all scientific journals). Overall this is a great start.

For the intro try to edit it to read more like summary instead of a string of random facts. Also look into presenting some more general information (depth, area, closest town).

As for the limnology section, this is in very good condition. There are definitely some grammatical errors throughout, but a couple read throughs should fix that. Honestly I think if you spend more words explaining the experiments reasonings and technical terms you should hit 1000 words in no time. I would make subsections for each experiment to help the reader distinguish when you switch from one to the other. Lastly, make sure to describe/explain things to a general public audience. For example most people do not understand the word piscivorous. You can solve this issue by giving the definitions or better yet linking the words to another wikipage.

Keep up the good work!

-Katie