User:Maxss20/Paul and Peter Lakes/Strubdr Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Maxss20


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Maxss20/Paul_and_Peter_Lakes?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your introductory paragraph is very broad and informing. I like how you got to the point and shared the basics of Paul and Peter Lake. In your lead you have sufficient information providing a solid background of the history of how these lakes in Wisconsin were formed. I found it interesting how you included surrounding ecosystem and biodiversity. I think this is actually very beneficial in terms that the surrounding ecosystems can contribute to the Carbon cycle and components of Organic Carbon material in the lakes. I think some information you could add would be some key hydrological information, give the reader a better understanding of the size of the lakes, the depth of the lakes, maybe add annual temperature of the lake. These are just a few additions that give the reader a better sense of the size and environment of the lakes. Your paragraph about Aquatic Ecology is very interesting and I really would like some more information, it is great information and very intriguing studies. It makes me want to read more about the studies, but I don't necessarily want to have to go to the sources to read more. Your sources have all very prestigious, you used Limnological journals, publish articles, and NSF. All of these are very reputable. You have a great draft for your article. Great job!