User:Maxwell.Bailey137/Economic epidemiology/Holnesjc5773 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Maxwell.Bailey137


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Maxwell.Bailey137/Economic_epidemiology?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Economic epidemiology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I think you have a good draft going! I do think building a little more within your published sandbox would be helpful. I'm not sure how much of the whole draft I am missing on my end, but I can only see "the skeleton."

The addition of COVID-19 pandemic is a good choice, especially how you seem to plan to tie it into the actual fiscal shortcomings within families but also industries. One suggestion I have is to look into how COVID-19 more than likely sky-rocketed sales for masks, disinfectants, and hand sanitizer—not sure if it's too relevant, but I thought it'd be interesting to include. Another thing I'd like to suggest is in the original article, it states "to incorporate incentives for healthy behavior and their attendant behavioral responses into an epidemiological context to better understand how diseases are transmitted." Perhaps looking into what these incentives have looked like (whether relating to COVID or not) could also add some depth for your article.

Some minor things are just to add sources to the information you have, specifically for the upper bound threshold deaths you have; the GDP data you included; the COVID deaths in the US; and overall just citing any outside information you add!

I hope that helps—I can also clarify anything if it doesn't make sense. It seems like a good draft and you have some good places to build off of!