User:MaxwellParsons/David Altmejd/DatsSnaz Peer Review

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MaxwellParsons
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Your content does seem neutral and not biased. Your content does seem well-written. It is concise, clear, and easy to read. I did not see any grammatical mistakes. Your sources seem fine. There was one that did not work which I told you about. As well as a few of your sources seemed a bit short but I dont think thats necessarily bad but Brion most likely will. If you have made the word count then I think right now you are good.