User:Maxygangadharan/Cheryl Marie Wade/Anypaver124 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Empro23, Promisepitman, Maxygangadharan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Maxygangadharan/Cheryl Marie Wade


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Maxygangadharan/Cheryl Marie Wade

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

No lead section for this article yet! Content is well organized (chronologically somewhat, but not confusing), has a way to see the contents and jump right to them. Also adds more information about her specific disability, Rheumatoid Arthritis, maybe it would be helpful to link to that page so a viewer could get more information on it!

All of the content seems relevant and up-to-date, everything there makes sense and is needed to understand Wade's life and work. Content is also neutral, and is about someone who fits the equity gaps (disabled women/disabled people/rights)

A lot of the information was from one source, a New York Times obituary for her, but it was up-to-date information on her life, including quotes from her about her life experience and even an example of one of her poems. Other sources included a "New Mobility", a magazine for wheelchair users, fulfilling a diverse spectrum of authors and perspectives on her life. All of the links work. Although there are a limited amount of sources, it seems there are limited information on Wade's life, and the sources found do a good job of providing the most information on her.

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