User:May.mach/Two-spirit/Jocelynn19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

May.Mach


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:May.mach/Two-spirit
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Two-spirit

Evaluate the drafted changes
== Hi, I reviewed your article and it looks great. I would just recommend to add more resources and check for grammar. For example, your forth sentence is a run on. So far you have a good two paragraphs but it appears as if you want to add more. Therefore, I would just recommend to place them in the corresponding section in the original article and not all together. Also, just a reminder to make your article live. ==