User:MayaMoss123456/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(The Blob (Pacific Ocean).)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I am interested in how climate change effects the ocean and marine life. My initial impression was that the article seemed pretty good, although possibly outdated

Evaluate the article
My first evaluation went more in depth but in an effort to save time so I can start working on my article I am going to summarize my first evaluation. I found that the lead section, media, tone and balance, and organization were all relatively good. Aside from needing a little clarity here and there the article is concise and easy to make sense of. Things that need some work are, clarity in places especially the last section and the sources the majority of them are from before 2015. That being said since the blob was a phenomenon that happened around 2015 it makes sense that most of the sources are from then, but it is worth looking to see if there is any new information about the blob. Overall I would say this article is medium developed it definitely needs some work but it is a solid starting point.