User:Mb973477/Joel Embiid/Bduke2020 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mb973477


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Joel Embiid
 * Joel Embiid

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

-Lots of info already included, might be hard to find new info

-Mention more about family life and life before America

-More about High School and College career