User:Mbartner/sandbox

The wikipedia page, "iPhone X," is very informative. It covers a lot of objective details about the device and its origin. Also, each sentence is a concise, objective statement, which keeps the article neutral and easy to find information. However, because it is a relatively new page, it is relatively short and lacks some important details, such as the different colors you can purchase the phone in. That being said, I plan on contributing some extra details that page might have left out so that readers can be better informed about the product.

Link to page: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/IPhone_X

My first addition was a sentence about the color options that the iPhone X comes in. This information is significant to include, especially because of the media hype that the iPhone received when they first introduced a white iPhone after having only had a black option for over 4 years. I received this information from Apple's website in their "tech specs" tab for the iPhone (https://www.apple.com/iphone-x/specs/). Additionally, I added two sentences talking about the material and its features of the phone. This information included the type of steel used to create the phone and the environmental protections it provides, like from water and dust. I found this information also on Apple's website, however, in their general iPhone X description page (https://www.apple.com/iphone-x/). Lastly, I updated the "predecessor field" to inform readers that the iPhone X was preceded by the iPhone 7 and iPhone 7 Plus. This information didn't need to be cited as it is relatively common knowledge and there is a graph on the page that displays that the iPhone 7 came before the iPhone X.