User:Mbenja/Malika Jeffries-EL/Aruizmontoya01 Peer Review

Peer review
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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Mbenja
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Mbenja/Malika Jeffries-EL

Lead

 * you have a very good paragraph. I think you have incorporated an importance sentence that gives more than just "studies organic semiconductors". good job.

Content

 * I'm glad you added her most recent education.
 * I think you should make it a bullet point section, yes.
 * one of the awards is out of chronological order, you can fix it.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:

"In 2002, supervised by Richard Tarkka, she completed her PhD in Synthetic Chemistry at GWU." I think you can change the sentence to an active voice.

Overall


 * I think you have done a really great job, I believe you have added great stuff. I really liked her page (as you have created/modified it) and I dno't believe your contributions will be taken down.

keep up the good work :)