User:Mblucas/Tyrone Hayes/AccidentalHerpetologist Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mblucas's group


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mblucas/Tyrone_Hayes?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Interesting read!

Some comments:


 * I'm a little wary of the source that you're using, agsense.org seems to be just a pro-astrazine blog. If you can find the actual EPA study, I would like that instead, and note any key differences or similarities between the EPA study and Hayes's.
 * When you click the author of the agsense.org piece that you cited, if you click his name it links to a crypto blog with similar initials as his by-line.
 * For the above reasons, I would also try to find a different source for the emails, and specify if the employees were UCB staff, graduate students, or employed via a consulting firm.