User:Mblucas/Tyrone Hayes/Ajaslay Peer Review

I would rephrase a couple of sentences to help with the flow of the paragraph. For example, “Tyrone Hayes claims that the endocrine disruptor, atrazine, is responsible for interfering with the sexual maturation in amphibians, specifically frogs. Upon exposure to atrazine in pesticides, Hayes also claims that humans are at a greater risk of physical anomalies. However, the Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) disputed Tyrone Hayes claim.” I think that rephrasing the sentences will give the paragraph a better flow. I would also cite these sentences as well.

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