User:Mblucas/Tyrone Hayes/LE4rSt0966 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mblucas


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tyrone Hayes

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Lead: Very strong lead; summarizes the subject at hand adequately and addresses essentially every aspect that the article later expounds upon: form early life, research, and advocacy.

Content: The content is very well organized, summarizing Dr. Hayes' achievements and work throughout the years. The content added seems up to date, with recent sources.

Tone and Balance: This article is very well balanced, proposing both the findings of Dr. Hayes and even contrarian work by his contemporaries, alluding to the controversy surrounding this research and his name. This article does not make an attempt to sway the reader one way or another.

Sources and References: The sources seem relevant and recent for the topic at hand. There is one reference [15] that was discovered to not work, but that is not a major issue by any means.

Organization: The article is well organized, pivoting adequately from each subject in the article. Perhaps a nice addition would be a deeper focus on Dr. Hayes' research, but it is understandable if this is an avenue not pursued, as this article is a biography and overview of Dr. Hayes' life and not his research.

Images and Media: The images and media included in the article are apt and are well-captioned and are sufficient aids that compliment the material in the article.

Overall Impressions: Overall, a well written article. For potential improvements, there are some gaps in citations that could be filled in. That, with potentially adding more detail to his research career and his findings (and those contrary to his findings) might be of interest to pursue for this article. Having said that, very well done and look forward to seeing what else is done with the article.