User:Mblucas/Tyrone Hayes/TortyT Peer Review

This article has a good foundation that just needs a little tweaking. The introduction is short and to the point, in a neutral tone just stating the facts that tyrone Hayes has accomplished. This is seen throughout the article and overall a good job at keeping a neutral view point. The content is up to date in all the sections and there are plenty of references. However there is some lacking with the other work section being a bit scarce in information. For that I would suggest looking into his research that he is conducting now and any other projects he might have assisted on or been a reviewer towards a scientific article. Some pictures of the the research he conducted on atrazine could be added. I could suggest adding an effects bullet/section to do edits too as there is not one present and I believe that could be important to know when reading the article. This is more so saying to expand on just saying it is an endocrine disruptor go into detail about why it causes issues.

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