User:Mbluek/Parental leave/Emmamwasserman Peer Review

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Mbluek

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft looks great. Information is clear and concise. However, I would consider adding a few more sources. As well, be sure to cite all information that is not yours. The organization is good, I would just suggest making it a little bit more substantial. The relation between race and gender is good, maybe be clearing about how these intersect with socioeconomic status and why. Overal great job!