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Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * History of dance
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article does not have enough citations to reliable sources and there are very few citations in the article. Many claims are missing a source or the sources is noted to be unreliable.
 * There is a lot of information that is missing. For example, there are not many examples of types of dances/music or composers related to them/influential people related which each era of dance mentioned. Every section seems very underdeveloped and more clarification is needed. There is also a lot of information missing about dance today (competitive dance, dancing in music videos, tap dancing, lyrical, jazz) and there seems to be no mention of the evolution of dance past the 1980s. The talk page also mentions a lot of missing information from the European era.
 * The source is written in a neutral and unbiased tone.
 * Sources
 * Possible sources to add to this article or to support claims already made
 * Dance Chronicle journal Published by: Taylor & Francis, Ltd. (it has relevant articles about dance from the 1970s to 2010s including different perspectives on dance such as the Martha Graham approach)
 * Staging the Ethnographic of Dance History: Contemporary Dance and Its Play with Tradition (Dance research journal - Yvonne Hardt)
 * Dance of India: Culture, Philosophy and Performance (Dance Research Journal - Rosemary Jeanes Antze) (someone in the talk page mentioned to add more about asian dance history)
 * Social Class and Social Dancing https://doi.org/10.1111/j.1533-8525.1966.tb01687.x (information about social dancing which is important in dance history but was not mentioned in the article)
 * Dance Competition Culture and Commercial Dance https://doi.org/10.1080/15290824.2018.1437622 (more information on dance today)
 * Consumer dance identity: the intersection between competition dance, televised dance shows and social media https://doi.org/10.1080/14647893.2020.1798394
 * The Carole: A Study of a Medieval Dance https://books.google.ca/books?hl=en&lr=&id=XXImqidJvnUC&oi=fnd&pg=PR7&dq=medieval+dance&ots=o5E2swooo0&sig=Eu26yNfwb5qGOIwv1uy_lg4jJ3k&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q=medieval%20dance&f=false (information about medieval dance which was not mention in the Wikipedia article)
 * Ringleaders of Redemption: How Medieval Dance Became Sacred https://books.google.ca/books?hl=en&lr=&id=ePYTEAAAQBAJ&oi=fnd&pg=PP1&dq=medieval+dance&ots=wunvqsAMEq&sig=WccKmPcvS2hOi67Oy-NzrCHskAE&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q=medieval%20dance&f=false
 * Courtly Dance of the Renaissance: A New Translation and Edition of the Nobiltà Di Dame (1600) https://books.google.ca/books?hl=en&lr=&id=PBwqMyKQvM4C&oi=fnd&pg=PP7&dq=renaissance+dance&ots=WELNnogMRG&sig=l6I5kYbQrnxc5xdLKl7IA5qqmEU&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q=renaissance%20dance&f=false (information on renaissance dance which was not mentioned in the Wikipedia article)
 * all academic journals or books*

Option 2

 * New Public Management
 * Article Evaluation
 * Article is written like a personal reflection, personal reflection or argumentative essay (states the authors feelings) and needs additional citations as well as verification for existing ones. (Talk page mentions a need for rewrite because of self promotion)
 * Article seems to be complete and contain good information.
 * Sources
 * New Public Management https://books.google.ca/books?hl=en&lr=&id=GOcBdvYNEkMC&oi=fnd&pg=PP13&dq=new+public+management&ots=oDAOKHmWpo&sig=5fMcSnSs-80EHLCCJ5q1O9dfv2M&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q=new%20public%20management&f=false
 * Thinking government: Public administration and politics in Canada, 4th edition by David Johnson (book)
 * New Public management: current trends and future prospects (edited by Kate McLaughlin, Stephem P. Osborne, Ewan Ferlie, Stephen Osborne P) https://books.google.ca/books?hl=en&lr=&id=5mYv_ihreGYC&oi=fnd&pg=PR10&dq=new+public+management&ots=gGKy-KB9oF&sig=DqAqG5JlkGmZm_TC2uTjynXVvEI&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q=new%20public%20management&f=false
 * Origin and theoretical basis of new public management (Gernod Gruening) https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S1096749401000411
 * all academic journals or books*

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Skin care
 * Article Evaluation
 * According to Wikipedia this page needs cleanup and "The specific problem is: multiple expansion tags and many references that lack proper associated text". Therefore the citations need to be revisited and make sure that the whole article is on the same page content wise.
 * There seems to be many sources and they are all very diverse and cover various aspects of the concept.
 * The article is written in a neutral fashion and seems to have good and relevant information. However, some of the sections could be more developed.
 * The talk page also mentions that this page is more related to cosmetic but skin care is more about the health of the skin than its appearance.
 * Sources
 * Nanoemulsions: a new vehicle for skincare products https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0001868603001465?casa_token=a68gXV-luQYAAAAA:afCgvB2XNiOaxY18Xe2a5sJpwSNIDnkcHEjhdr2p9TyTAKXKqFPL78ksLK8M6Wgybm5Axes1m_U (new form of skincare not mentioned in the Wikipedia article)
 * Quantitative Assessment of Healthy Skin Elasticity: Reliability and Feasibility of Shear Wave Elastography https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S030156291630326X?casa_token=V1xsEfdXHfEAAAAA:e9zJSFetHtjq2Uw7OzhYN3m8Zb_34Mn5PBBq84ZzSS-tflsnOQ97fJiTRp0O4DnHVNers6bPuCU (discusses more about healthy skin rather than skincare cosmetics which was needed to add in the article)
 * Topical effectiveness of a cosmetic skincare treatment for acne-prone skin: A clinical study http://thejournalhub.s3.amazonaws.com/10.15570/archive/acta-apa-11-2/2.pdf (develop more the section about acne and products that benefit it)
 * Aging skin: The role of diet: Facts and controversies https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0738081X13000722?casa_token=qxGwFYkq1jkAAAAA:EUDdKDMupqg39e0ZAgm4gP-ODfOrVbRypnTLJOsq1s6BTs1ra7k1bcjpuTIMLdBeQJu-L4qGtW0 (to develop the part of diet for healthy skin - only one line was mentioned in the actual article)
 * all academic journals*

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Option 5

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