User:Mbraile/Dark ride/TheA04 Peer Review

General info
Mbraile
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mbraile/Dark ride
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dark ride

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * A lead section that is easy to understand - The added information adds to the lead section with notable details that are necessary to having more understand of Dark Rides.
 * A clear structure - I think the strongest part of your addition to the article is the added new content. Not only does it expand some of the talking points/discussion of the existing article, but also introduces discussion about social issues surrounding Dark Rides.
 * Balanced coverage - Adding information about Social Barriers is important for having a balanced coverage of the information needed about Dark Rides and adds another layer to the wiki article.
 * Neutral content - For wiki assignments, your tone goes along with the neutral tone and factual content.
 * Reliable sources - You have a good amount of references, some of which are peer reviewed papers or from well-established historical sources.

Overall, your sandbox looks great.