User:Mbstjohn/Onnie Lee Logan/JessicabowmanOU Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Mbstjohn)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mbstjohn/Onnie Lee Logan


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Onnie Lee Logan

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reading your proposed changes to the wikipedia article about Onnie Lee Logan, I overall thought that your additions are great and will definitely add substance to the original article. I feel that you did a great job with remaining neutral in what you were adding, but I would potentially reconsider doing anything with parenthesis, to make it look and read more professional, as well as aid in the flow of your article.