User:Mbutler2001/Epioblasma obliquata/Lrokos Peer Review

User:Mbutler2001/Epioblasma obliquata/Lrokos Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mbutler2001


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mbutler2001/Epioblasma_obliquata?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Epioblasma obliquata

Lead
I would definitely update the lead section, especially since you are adding new sections to the article. It currently is two sentences, so adding one sentence from each section (description, behavior, and conservation) could really strengthen it.

Content
All of the content you've added is good, and the only thing I would suggest is adding hyperlinks to other wikipedia articles. For example, I would link a wikipedia page for morphology because some poeple might not understand what that is talking about.

Tone and Balance
There are no biased claims, and your tone is neutral throughout the article. Good job!

Sources and References
I would suggest citing your sources after each claim you provide. I see what you did by adding it at the end of each paragraph, but I am just nervous for plagiarism reasons. I would also suggest adding some primary literature, such as the "Discovery of the Federally Endangered Freshwater Mussel, Epioblasma Obliquata Obliquata in Ohio" and "Development and Characterization of Microsatellite Loci in the Endangered Catspaw, Epioblasma Obliquata". These would be helpful for some basic information to add to your sections.

Organization
When adding your edits, I would suggest moving the taxonomy section of the article below the lead, as many other articles organize it that way. But other than that, the organization of your edits is good!

Overall impressions
Your edits definitely improve the article, as the current article is really short. Adding more about the species in general is always good, and adding these edits to the article will strengthen it a lot and give people more information about this species. Overall, good job!