User:Mbuyer2/Sani ol molk/Rizing153rose Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mbuyer2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mbuyer2/Abul l-Hasan (Sani al Mulk)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sani ol molk

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall your article was amazing! You really found a lot of details that weren't in the original wiki article and really closed the gaps in the original article. I like your lead because I get a good sense of the artist. I also like how you separated the content, it was very nicely organized and well written. I think once the pictures are incorporated, this article will be so so great!!