User:McCupcake31/Seer Bonnet (Ellsworth)/Dismurrt Peer Review

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McCupcake31
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Seer Bonnet
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Seer Bonnet

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall you have a very good and in depth description of your work. I think it is very helpful that you not only described your work but additionally took the time to add a photo related to your work. I additionally think that your "Related Work" section is very helpful, especially to put this piece into a larger context. Constant links to other wikipedia pages allow for easy access to understanding those that you reference too. One thing I do find lacking in the article is citations. While there is a decently sized reference section, a lot of information in your article does not feature a reference tied to it. Additionally, many of your citations do not lead directly to a certain concept or thought. Overall, you have a very detailed and very amazing article, and I think by adding further references, or tying your current references to their specific claims will help to further validate your claims and thoughts and overall really strengthen your article.