User:McGlacklin/Pipil people/Crismiochumble Peer Review

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(Valin12345)
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Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that correcting and deleting certain words/ wording can improve the overall article. I think it would be a good thing to do since I found the "Nahua" and "Nahuatl" explanation a little confusing, even with prior knowledge of Mesoamerica groups. Creating a new section for food can be a good idea since the main article doesn't have one. I also believe that food, and to a certain extent where the food comes from, can be very informative about a particular group of people. It's also important culturally to know what they ate and how it was affected by their environment.

I really like the idea of connecting the food they ate to modern food consumed in present day El Salvador. I believe that making strong connections between the past and the present with the Pipil people is important in noting the gradual change(s) to the group as time goes by, especially with colonization, imperialism, etc.

The article for the Pipil people could stand to benefit from a section that talks about their culture pre-modern times. Like in the modern Nahua culture section it talks about preserving cultural practices and etc., so I think this article can stand to benefit from a section or at least new information the conveys these cultural practices more in detail. Perhaps some information on what differentiates different groups of modern Nahua people throughout Central America.