User:McLaren481/Suso Cecchi d'Amico/Curiouscat21 Peer Review

Lead
Concise and informative lead section. Good attention to detail as it mentions that she helped pioneer the Italian neorealist movement.

Content
A wealth of new content has been added to the article to strengthen the short, brief paragraphs that were already on the Wikipedia page. The author has improved them drastically.

The 'Life' section is large and also the only section, so the author could break this down into sub-sections, for example early life, education, career, style of screenwriting as it seems that the author uses most sources to write about the Cecchi d'Amico's background.

Tone and Balance
The author maintains a neutral tone throughout and does not attempt to persuade the reader of any opinion or other. The tone and standard of writing is up to a high level throughout.

Sources and References
The author uses a good number of sources with reliable, independent origins. They use a range of news articles and journal articles. The content is well referenced throughout the article.

Organisation
Helpfully organised to distinguish between the original content of D'Amico's Wikipedia page and the new content added by the author.

The author could also include a section delving into D'Amico's screenwriting in more detail for example her influences, themes, form, style.

Overall Impressions
Overall I enjoyed reading the article and had no idea about the talent of this Italian screenwriter, so it proved very valuable, considering her huge influence in Italian film and neorealism. The author has definitely improved the original article. I would just say to focus mostly on organising and polishing the article into shorter, even sections. The author could also add a table detailing her awards.

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