User:Mc tullochgorm/Quadrille/Turny1516 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * MC Tullochgorm


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Quadrille
 * Quadrille

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Gave more context to what you are reading about and helps the reader to get a better idea of what it is and looks like. remained relevant to the article and had no bias to it.