User:Mcarl30/Werkbund Exhibition (1914)/Crispy303 Peer Review

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MCarl30
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 * User:Mcarl30/Werkbund Exhibition (1914)
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 * User:Mcarl30/Werkbund Exhibition (1914)

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Hello there!

I really enjoyed the article you edited/wrote. Primarily because I had no prior knowledge of the Werkbund exhibition. The first thing I noticed was the inclusion of the all types of new and relevant information pertaining directly to your topic. It seems as though you were able to include lots of important new information to the article starting with the discusiion of the "Farbenschau Pavillion". Tbis section seems to. have been filled in with a bit more background and contextual information that would be needed in order to full grasp the exhibition.

I enjoyed the inclusion of a floor plan of the pavilion as well its a really nice touch that helps the reader visualize the entire structure.

You included a ton of new and interesting information in the rest of your article as well, Ifound that the tone used for the entire piece was well balanced and nutral with a educational and academic undertone highlighting the importance of the Pavilion.

You did an overall fantastic job from my perspective on your article, I wish you the best of luck in your future academic and life endeavours.

Best,

Andrew