User:Mcarl30/Werkbund Exhibition (1914)/KevBlaze Peer Review

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Mcarl30
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Hey Macie I am reviewing the additions you added to the article: Werkbund Exhibition (1914). The addition of several facilities that were apart of the exhibit was a great objective to go for. It gives insight in the several different architectural designs that present during the exhibition. The content you added is relevant to the subject and is up to date; the facilities you added upon helps fill in missing information about the Werkbund Exhibition. The content you added is neutral and simply describes your subject. There is no bias or overrepresentation of a single subject, you clearly explain the artistic styles of the artist represented in the exhibit. Your reference links work and are great peer reviewed references, I could not find better ones that relate to your subject. Even though some of the sources are from the 80's they still give prominent information about the history of your subject. The image of the floor plan you added was a great addition to help the reader understand how the exhibition was set up and relate to the facilities. In terms of organization I think that moving the art contributions to its own section could help the reader reference the facilities while they read the art contributions.

Great article Macie!