User:Mcartano/Cultivation theory/Amandalonsoo Peer Review

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This article looks into the concept of cultivation Theory in relation to those who are actively exposed to sports media through television viewing and the impact they have on these people. Cultivation Theory is a sociological and communication framework to examine the lasting effects of media, delivery primarily through the influence of television. The central I got active of cultivation analysis sister do people spend more time watching television and are more likely to perceive the real world in a way that is more commonly depicted in television messages in comparison with those who watch less television.

The various issues raised within the article have been effective in planning the cultivation theory and the impact that the media and television have on their frequent users and longtime users. Based on the information and references in the contents is very up-to-date although there may have been some more information and new trends within the media industry and the general people's lives articles were published. The issue of racism and ethnicity has been covered within the article and through this, it has touched on the issue of underrepresented populations as far as the topic is concerned.

Tone and Balance

To some extent, the content within this article has been useful as well as the others. There are only a few instances when some parts of the content seem to be less neutral and balanced in favour of that. According to the article, " a substantial part of stereotyping and perception of bias in media is due to their representation." a lack of representation can cause people, especially children, to feel a lack of self-worth or less volume and there is a social group. Representation to their form the best on merit while our present time and sharing equally among the various groups. The content is not available trying to persuade the reader in favour of any position or away from others.

Sources and References

The article has been backed up by various reliable secondary sources of information that include previous research, historical events, blog posts and previous literature. The various sources dispersed some of the issues raised in this article in detail India map effects references for this content. Although there are other reliable sources and others with more information, I think this one is the best considering the information given them within the body.

Organization

The content is well-presented, concise and easy to read. However, there are a few lines and phrases that may seem difficult to understand by some readers. For instance, in the first sentence on the "Race and ethnicity" section, the other seems to have missed out on some information or presented way too much of it since it does not make grammatical sense. The author may have intended to present different information or the sentence itself is not better call me. There are no grammatical or spelling errors and the general organisation of the statement section are well-written.

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Overall impressions

Generally, the article has presented well the issue at hand in a quality that is more than average. The impact of Media on various groups of people has proven to be significant to the point of affecting the way the life of various people turns out to be. The author has managed to present the argument of the issues at hand and backed them up with some reliable sources. Although there is still more that can be done to ensure even more quality of this content, the author has ensured that the information is presented effectively.

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