User:Mcartano/Cultivation theory/Med20a Peer Review

General info
Mcatano
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mcartano/Cultivation theory
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cultivation theory:

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead has not yet been updated, but the content that has been added at the top of the page is helpful in explaining the magic bullet theory. There are no added images. The addition to the race and ethnicity section is substantial and will fit well within the article. Viewpoints have begun to be added that create more rounded article. The writing is clear and easy to follow. Overall, great work!