User:Mcastanho707/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Clinical physiology

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I am majoring in the field of microbiology and the way our bodies work have always fascinated me when studying. So naturally, I chose this topic. I felt this subject was documented well and there were only 1 or 2 changes I would make to the article. I actually found it very informative.

Evaluate the article
At the end of the first paragraph in Role, I would change the sentence "...specialties in internal medicine such as..." and not have it end with "others." Either list the specialties it helps with or emit the sentence entirely. Also, the reference #5 does not associate with where it is placed in the article. The #5 reference is listed as jobs and salary for Clinical Physiologists for the part of the article that is mentioning about patients being able to be diagnosed by being a certified technician. It does not match with the reference. If the article had added a subject paragraph or sentence listing about jobs and who could be a candidate then it would be appropriate. I would also maybe expand on the history of medicine relating to this topic and how patients are benefitted from the emergence of this sub-division of Physiology. Everything else seemed relevant, I did not know of this prior to reading this article.