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Since I think the article needs some revision I think The Wikipedia page should include all the different chapters that are in the book Asking for it. For example, “The Problem of False Accusations”, which talks about how there are cases that someone accuses someone of raping them but are lying about it, which gets the other person in trouble even though they didn’t do anything to the person accusing them. In the Wikipedia article I would also name the chapters and write a lot about False rapes and what it could cause or why people report false rapes. I would also include a lot of links where you can learn more about the topics since you must go by the Wikipedia rules and not write down definitions of the words or topics.

To make the problem of false accusations relevant to the Wikipedia page I would add why people make false accusations, and how you would know if someone is falsely accusing someone of rape. I would also add reliable information from the book Asking for it by Kate Harding, so you know that the information that is being written could actually be found somewhere else. To also improve the grade of the article I would have to make sure that everything that is written could be understood by anyone that is reading the edited article.

Another topic that would be relevant to the article rape culture that could be added would be “Simple Safety Tip for Lady’s”. I would talk about information that ladies should follow to keep themselves safe and to avoid any danger. I would also use information that is in chapter Two of the book asking for it. I would include that one tip could be that going to the bathroom as a group of girls together is better than to go alone. And that is a reliable piece of information that can also be proven real because it was also included in asking for it. So for me to add more information I would also make sure the information is accurate as well. When someone edits a page on Wikipedia it is revised quickly to make sure it’s acceptable and reliable for others to use then it stays up. The rape culture page already has a lot of useful information that’s helpful to everyone even me.