User:Mcelvoguem/sandbox

Looking at the Lyons Township High School article on Wikipedia as a whole, there are multiple changes that can be made to enhance the article. Some of these more general changes might include updating any information that is out of date, adding more detail to specific paragraphs, correcting the organization of certain sections and removing or fixing any links that are no longer existent or not reliable. Since the Lyons Township article displays a lot of information it might be difficult updating the entire article with the most current and accurate information. I believe it would be more beneficial to focus on specific areas of the article such as the introductory paragraph, athletics, awards and some of the extra curricular activities mentioned. A problem that is consistent throughout the article is that much of the information is out of date. This problem can be easily fixed by using the high school’s website and other sources to simply replace the old information with more recent information. The article currently lacks any use of multimedia which is crucial when trying to grab readers attention. A picture of both campuses of the high school should be added, maybe even a photo of an important faculty member or the school’s mascot.

"LION Newspaper | The Voice of Lyons Township Students for More than 100 Years." LION Newspaper. N.p., n.d. Web. 09 Mar. 2015.

"Lyons Township High School District 204 / Homepage." Lyons Township High School District 204 / Homepage. N.p., n.d. Web. 09 Mar. 2015.