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Topic: Counter-Enlightenment

Problem:
 * 1) This article includes a list of references, but its sources remain unclear because it has insufficient inline citations. (December 2011)
 * 2) This article is written like a personal reflection, personal essay, or argumentative essay that states a Wikipedia editor's personal feelings or presents an original argument about a topic. (August 2012)

Changes:
 * Changed the date when this term appeared for the first time, which was conflicted with the following text; made the beginning paragraph less 'personal' and more concise
 * Put more detail in the early history of Counter-Enlightenment; Put more citations in the text
 * /* Counter-Enlightenment movement vs Enlightenment thinkers */ changed the negative words and passive languages used in this section; reorganized the section with more clarity
 * Changed the language of the entry to a less 'essay-like' and more impartial
 * /* Romantic revolt against the eighteenth century */ changed the subtitles for each section
 * Added in-text citations; added more content; solved two issues