User:Mchoe1artic/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Louis Sullivan

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It is a complete article with excellent list of sources; it is a good starting point to learning how to edit and evaluate Wikipedia.

Evaluate the article
This is a good article overall, some suggestions and evaluations below:

-Overall tone seems to have some "wikipuffery" in it. Rhetorical expressions like "remarkable" and "admired" should be skipped in descriptions.

-"Sullivan and the steel high-rise" section, as well as the "Later career" section requires more sources. Especially since these sections are largely summarizing broad swaths of information.

-"Sullivan in Ayn Rand's The Fountainhead" seems to take up more space relative to its importance regarding the subject. Expanded Comparisons between the fictional Sullivan and his real life character, and other trivial analysis does not need to be there.

-Article well represents his works in its selection of documenting his work, as well as choosing the right photo resources to help the reader.