User:Mckewill/A Day Out in Liverpool/518quinn Peer Review

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Mckewill
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The lead has a topic sentence that is concise and accurate. It introduces the film in a reasonable amount of detail, and touches briefly on the production conditions and historical context. The content is all relevant to the film, and up-to-date as it references a newer release which uses footage from the film. The article does not deal with any equity gaps. The article takes on a neutral tone and does not argue a certain position. All cited references are reliable and come from peer-reviewed published works or government funded organizations. The information is organized sensibly for the subject matter and allows for easy reading. There are no images so no media can breach copyright laws.