User:Mcking24/Reef manta ray/Rcepolski Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mcking24


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mcking24/Reef_manta_ray?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Reef manta ray

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like how you are adding how pollution affects the reef manta ray; pollution is a good conservation topic that needed to be mentioned. I think it would be a good idea to put a link to "microplastic pollution" because some readers might not know what it means. Going into more detail about how microplastic pollution has an impact on the rays would be helpful for readers to have a better understanding of the effects (you can take information from your reference). It would be good if you were to add more references and go into some more detail about the how pollution is impacting the reef manta rays (a few more sentences would be good). The lead section seems well developed and there is probably not much more you need to do with it. There is also very good images/ media on the page already, but if you would like to add an image regarding pollution I think that would enhance the article. Everything in the article/edit seems to be in a neutral and informative tone.

Information added so far is correct and from reliable sources, just add a few more and you should be good.

Overall, good start, just keep adding more information and then you should be good to go!

Here is an article that I think might be helpful!

https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fmars.2019.00679/full?sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwiL-eX06pHnAhUPnq0KHarTC7oQuAIwKXoECBQQAg