User:Mcksealy01/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Floy Agnes Lee

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It gives the format for how I should be doing a biography.

Evaluate the article
It gives a clear, concise, and brief biography of the person. It is easy to read and grammatically correct. I couldn't really identify big shortcomings, but I think it could be improved by adding clear introductory sentences to each paragraph. For example, instead of beginning a section by saying, "After the war ended,..." they could be clear on what war and make it a better introductory sentence to the section.