User:Mcm203/Acid Rain/Aideng427 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mcm203


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Acid rain: Difference between revisions - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Acid rain: Difference between revisions - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes.
The content added is relevant and up to date but when you talk about the health effects caused by the particulates you mention the affects that the chemicals will have on the heart and lungs but only further discuss the affects about the heart not the lungs. So, I'd include more specific examples in that regard. Your links seem to work well and are up to date the information you provided has relevance to the article and shows no persuasion.

Thank you for the help.

-Mcm203