User:Mcm203/Acid Rain/IRiptide Peer Review

General info
Mcm203
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Acid rain:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Acid rain:

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

If able to, go into detail, before explaining the effects it has on humans, about what nitrate particles and fine sulfate effect other things, such as materials if applicable. It can give the readers a good sense if it harms materials such as plastic or steal, then it is definitely doing a bigger effect than what is explained afterwards. Also, maybe provide some examples of other heart diseases and conditions that could come from acid rain and the effects it can lead on the body because of these conditions. Such as increased risk of heart attacks or blockage in the arteries. The more detail the better on the effects on what it does to the heart.

Thank you for the help.

-Mcm203