User:Mcm203/Acid Rain/Tmx5027 Peer Review

General info
Mcm203
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * 01:21, 26 October 2023‎
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Acid rain

Evaluate the drafted changes
For this part, I think everything works well, and it's informative for readers. The information here is also not bias, or looks have a purpose to persuade people.

The only suggestion I have, is try to talk what's effect on lungs. Your writing had already include the example of heart effect, but you had mentioned it would effect both lungs and heart.

Thank you for the help.

-Mcm203