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This is an evaluation of communication design article.

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Communication design

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
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I chose to evaluate this article because communication design seems important in the context of this class. This article is also flagged for having many issues and is rated as Start-Class, meaning there is a lot of room for improvement. This article is also of interest to multiple WikiProjects, meaning the content is relevant and important for some groups and should be improved. After reading the article, my initial impression was that it was poorly written with confusing structure.

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Lead Section

The introductory description of the topic is not clear nor concise. The wording is confusing and does not introduce the topic in a helpful way. The lead section also discusses ideas that are not included in the body of the article, such as "a systems-based approach" and "a framework for Communication as Design." Either sections should be added in the body to expand on these ideas, or these sentences should be removed from the lead section.

Content

The article's content is relevant, though it could be more robust. A major topic that could be further developed related to communication design is how this discipline is used in organizations or businesses. It is briefly touched on how the goal of communication design is to influence some desired outcome by presenting a message to an audience in a certain way, but I think this section could be expanded to show the big role communication design plays in marketing plans and business goals.

Tone and Balance

This article appears to be balanced and provide a neutral view. The only thing of note is a sentence in the lead section that discusses a piece of research that examines the way "democratic ideals" are built into the design of communication technology. Having this in the lead section seems random and irrelevant. However, I think the topic of politics and communication is interesting and would be helpful for readers to understand, so this would have to be further developed in a distinct section that shows both sides equally.

Sources and References

References seem to be from reputable sources, and links work when provided. Because important information/detail is missing in the content of the article, it can be said that the sources are not thorough. Most sources are current, though one is from 1975, one is from 1997, and a few are from the early 2000s. These could be updated with newer references.

Organization and Writing Quality

The quality of the writing struck me immediately. The author(s) seem to be trying to use technical/professional language but it makes the text hard to understand. Clear, concise language would be best in this context. The article also has few sections, meaning the information covered in each section is very broad and could be organized more narrowly. Additionally, there are noticeable grammatical errors and missing words.

Images and Media

There are no images or media, which is interesting because this is a topic that centers around the design of communications in all formats, including visual communication.

Talk Page Discussion

There are no conversations on the talk page. The article is of interest to the following WikiProjects: WikiProject Graphic design, WikiProject Human–Computer Interaction, WikiProject Journalism, WikiProject Marketing & Advertising, WikiProject Media, WikiProject Typography, WikiProject Visual arts.

Overall Impressions

Overall, this article could benefit from improvement in expansion of topics, more current resources, and grammatical editing. It is currently rated as Start-Class and is underdeveloped. There is a lot of information surrounding the topic of communication design and the ideas are touched on in this article, but they could be developed in a clearer way. Editing for grammar and missing words will also be important in solidifying the article's credibility. General conciseness and wording could also be improved.