User:Mcoope17/1138 Aleppo earthquake/Dtkraft Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Group members: Alex.Parker200, Bullpenboys19, Nwalls3528, Mcoope17


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mcoope17/1138 Aleppo earthquake


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 1138 Aleppo earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

First of all, I definitely think you need more information here but that's fine there's still time to add more. You said that "the cost of reconstruction was high" but I think you should be more specific about that. Your information in the "Accuracy of record-keeping" section should be sourced. Try to fix the first source in your bibliography because for some reason there doesn't seem to be a working link. The rest of your bibliography links do work but I would be careful of what sources you are using because I can tell you're just using the first sources that pop up on google when you search up 1138 Aleppo Earthquake. I think it'll be a little hard for you to find information for this earthquake considering how long ago it happened but maybe you could try to find some information from the sources that already in the article.