User:Mcoope17/1138 Aleppo earthquake/Logangarvin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

1138 Aleppo earthquake


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mcoope17/1138_Aleppo_earthquake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 1138 Aleppo earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great information, but sources seem disorganized and not linked directly to the information itself. Besides "Economic and Political Effects of the Aleppo Earthquake", the other sections lack any sort of direct reference to the information itself. Besides this, it really is fascinating how one of the deadliest earthquakes may not be as deadly as they say, simply because the total death toll is the lump sum of possibly 2 different earthquakes. I would definitely elaborate on it, as it would clear the air regarding the ranking in death range of such an event. It seems silly to use "Encyclopedia Brittanica" as one of your sources too, as although the information may be true, it isn't a refutable source as other works of information may be. I would reccomend expanding on the information already presented and fact checking it to make sure that it is accurate to what really happened.