User:Mcoope17/1138 Aleppo earthquake/OLarios204 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Mcoope17


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Mcoope17/1138_Aleppo_earthquake&veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&redirect=no


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 1138 Aleppo earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

For the section about economic and political effects has several bullet points, these can be connected and formed into a paragraph. The 3 ideas are all from the same source so maybe try to locate one more source that details of similar ideas and notions. Then connect it all together with how important the citadel was briefly, and how successful or unsuccessful the new system that tried to bring people back in was.