User:Mcortes19/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: Turlock, California - Wikipedia
 * Article Evaluation:
 * The article is about the city of Turlock in Stanislaus, California. The article is written neutrally. The economy section has a message stating that it needs citation. The economy section talks about the most employed companies but doesn't have a source from where it states that. The rest of the citations are reliable. The article has a history section about its agriculture that talks about the racial and labor conflicts about Japanese and the white men. The article is a Start-Class. In the Talk Page section other Wikipedians are discussing the name reference and history of "Turlough" that does not have a source so it should be removed and that the size in not accurate. Some contribution I would do is to talk about Downtown Turlock, the article briefly mentions it in an image, but I think more information about it would give a better understanding about the city other than its agriculture which seems to be the main focus. Probably change the image used for CSU Stan since it doesn't help much and add more pictures about the agriculture.
 * Sources:
 * Talks about Emanuel Center being biggest company in Turlock
 * Talks about culture in Downtown Turlock

Option 2

 * Article title Desmos - Wikipedia
 * Article Evaluation:
 * The article Desmos is about an online graphic and scientific calculator. The article is written neutrally. Each claim has a citation and are reliable. The article does not tackle one of Wikipedia's equity gaps. Other wikipedians are talking about updating the article since Desmos is an advanced application that usually requires some updated installations that include new features. As of October, this is the most recent topic and are asking to help update the article talking about any new features on the application. Recently on an outside source, no updates are shows for October since the one in September which is the latest one is already talked about. I think for the last paragraph in the History section should probably be moved because it mostly talks about the new update and features. Probably move it down to features or make a new section about it.
 * Sources:
 * Updates on Desmos

Option 3

 * Article title Goodwill Industries - Wikipedia
 * Article Evaluation: The articles content is relevant to the topic, which is the company, Goodwill. The article is a Start Class and has a section saying it needs to be updated since it is outdated by 3-13 years. The article contains sections about criticism but keeps it neutral. The citations are reliable. The article mentions events about being underpaid. The articles Talk page mentions that some parts should be removed, citations and making it neutral. Some contribution I agree with is the image, they should include an image about how it looks inside the stores and also the bins that they provide and if there is any particular way to the places, they locate them. Also include a section about its economy because it probably is a difference from the past to present due to how its popularity has grown online.
 * Sources: Information about goodwill's Economy.

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