User:Mcsuft/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
My Bad (Dexter) - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I have seen every episode of Dexter many times, as it is one of my favorite shows. It matters because there are many seasons with lots of episodes, so each page for each episode should have enough information that would let a reader understand what is going on.

Evaluate the article
The lead section does provide an introductory sentence that explains what the topic is, but it does not appear to really describe the upcoming sections of the page which could make it seem more concise. Regarding the content, it does give an overview of the main events that happen within the episode but is written in a way that does not seem very neutral. I also feel like there could be a few more details added because it makes it seem like Dexter realizing he loved Rita was not as big of a deal as it was, since he is a psychopath who is not supposed to feel any emotions. I also feel like a big part of this episode was how disconnected Dexter seemed to feel and how that affected the people around him, but that is not really mentioned, and the article seems more focused on showing off their vocabulary. Later in the article, it talks about the reception of this episode and the last sentence of this section seems like it could be unnecessary and kind of seems like it could be hinting at a slight bias towards the main character. There are also not many references included, which could mean that there is some information that is lacking a source making it unreliable.

Overall, the article is pretty easy to read and if I had not watched Dexter so many times it would probably not feel so unfinished. It is broken into sections, but when I looked at other Dexter related pages that have higher ratings, it is missing a lot including images and other background information that does not only relate to the plot of the episode. Looking at the talk page, I can see that it is not very up to date, and I can also see that the two people who looked at this page feel like it is written more so as a review than something in an encyclopedia. This article is rated as a Stub, but that could be improved if someone was to add more about the plot and some of the background like the filming process or casting, which was included in higher rated Dexter articles. This would also make it feel more complete.