User:Md0386/Maternal mortality in the United States/Hamsalim07 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Md0386


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Md0386/Maternal mortality in the United States


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Maternal mortality in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall a well written addition to the existing article on Maternal mortality in the United States. I think the lead has been left unchanged and already encompasses the changes made. The content is presented a neutral manner with good sources that appear to be from well-respected experts with little to no added bias or non-neutrality. I think that the sources are current and that they improve upon the article by adding in up-to-date information that seems to be an upgrade in the article.

The information added is presented concisely, yet thoroughly with few run on or hard-to-read sentences. The section added on Intimate partner violence was well-written and a vital addition to the overall article to further information available to us as health professionals and our future patients. I think some sentences may have some medical jargon but that may be unavoidable. I would consider adding in embedded links to articles already present. Specifically, in the IPV section. Otherwise, well done other than a few tweaks in the information you added.