User:Mdbutler7/Substance-induced psychosis/Jpow05 Peer Review

General info
(provide username) Mdbutler7
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead paragraph in the draft is concise on what may be talked about in the future. It is clear and concise and does not contain any information that is misleading or trying to persuade the reader to think about one perspective more than the other. However, I believe more information can be added to the introduction, such as adding a sentence or two about the topics that would be discussed further on in the article draft. This could give an introduction into the body of the article.

With this being said, there is not much to the body that can be discussed. I believe more infomration about the correlation/relationship between substance use and schizophrenia can be added on in order to give more insight on the topic. There is a lot of information about substance use and its effects on different mental illnesses, the effect it can have on neurotypicals, etc. There is not much added to the body section, so I advise just adding in more information as of right now.

All of the articles used are up to date and are within the past 10 years, the links work, and they are related to the topic at hand as it gives more information about the different illegal drugs listed in the body.