User:Mdivestea/Southwest, Syracuse/Nateleboeuf Peer Review

General info
Nate - ??
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Southwest, Syracuse
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello! Here is my peer review of your first draft.


 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? I think examining this question more would allow you to expand on your first sentence.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? I'm sure you will add more content to the page as we continue, but a lot of information could be added to make your content more informational. What is the neighborhood known for? What events happen here? The missing information is probably the main critique I have!
 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? The sources for your current information are strong, but because there's not as much content there's only 2 sources.

I'd also recommend adding an image of the neighborhood on a city map, as well as an image of a landmark in the area. I look forward to seeing its growth!